Stolen Sins

She is befallen, guilt is there

 

When at her spinning wheel she dared

 

To play with fire,smote the storm

 

with invitations so forlorn

 

Wicked lace and absinthe vial

 

Abysmal charm so does defile

 

She could not help but entertain

 

the centuries of former pain

 

Violet eyes descend to black

 

Heaven wouldn't take her back

 

She is bedazzled; sets her fate

 

Seeking darkness in her mate

 

Pale skin calls so fresh and smooth

 

Milky white,adorned with youth

 

Feel the warmth as veins do flow

 

Her biting fangs in moonlight's glow

 

A scream released into the night

 

As love illuminates her might

Reviews

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nice job.
alliteration done just nice and not too much (it can get so convoluted in couplets...)
"stolen sins" - good form, and timeless subject.
thanks for sharing

[Avocations of Amber]

thank you..... whoever you may be :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the purpose of the poem. The good description led the reader to darkness and a dangerous place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

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nice to see some metered couplets now and then...in L5, did you mean vial or vile?...just wondering