Hormonal Heartbreaks

Dopa-gone 

Like with the wind 

Chasing their dreams 

In some distant pasture 

Seroto-not-with-you 

That's all that mattered 

They didn't care where they went 

As long as they weren't here 

Oxyto-see-ya 

A careless wave 

Was all that they left me 

When they strolled out the door 

Endor-finally-free-from-you 

They were always desperate to go 

I held on with all that I had 

But eventually they left too

Reviews

[barleygirl]

WILDLY CREATIVE & ORIGINAL!!!! This is a huge inspiration for thinking outside the dots! I love the perfect way you crafted those first lines of every stanza! Plus, each following statement is so impactful, so truthful, reminding me of every hormonal heartbreak I've ever had (& there have been tons!) I really love this fun fierce play on words!

[Bacchus]

Wow-
Because I can totally relate to all these disappearing
this is a treasure to me.

Well, well done...
back to this roller-coaster
of hormones.