Something Below the Waters

there is no imposibility when it come to LOVE

SOMETHING IN THE WATERS

 

Things below the waters are so beautiful

It is so beautiful that can be deceitful

It is so difficult to get to the bottom

Because beautiful things are not easily gotten

I think I found something beautiful

Which is found below the waters

It threatens to be dreadful

If I want to get it by all cost

I think I have to try

I think I have to be patient

Think I shall wait for the sea to get dry someday

Then I shall get that beautiful treasure of mine.

Author's Note

what will you do?

Reviews

[Eldee]

The first thing I noticed was the font size- and I admit that was a bit shocking. Perhaps if you used a smaller font then the poem itself could be read for what it is? Rather then the gargantuous thing that it appears to be :) The actual poem was interesting. The open format was well done, with a few places where I stumbled slightly because the way it was written did not make sense. Your use of "gotten" seemed slightly off and took away from the beauty of this work, perhaps another word?

The content of this poem was very mysterious and enchanting. Good job :)

[Kate]

I love this! It's so mystical and mysterious. Very good job.