'Defense Mechanism'

Re-written, using different words. But I have managed to retain the same flavour.

It’s for my sake that,

I pretend you are still here.

Else I may not live.

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Beautiful Senryu :)
There is a lot of depth in your write, full of emotions and pain!
I also saw that sense of affection which is still alive in your heart...
Beautiful...really beautiful!



"Worst thing in life is ATTACHMENT... because it hurts when you loose it. :(
And best thing in life is LONELINESS...because it teaches you everything when you get it.. :) "

[A.L. James]

This is very sad

[V. K. Harris]

A Longing for his Love, Beautiful.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Another wonderful write here.......so sad and touching!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This sounds like the beginning of a country song. lol I like this senyru and the title.