CoFFEE

Attempting to re-construct this one. Can anyone help...?

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Every sip keeps me distracted from life's troubles

Everyone and everything may come and go quickly but addiction hangs around faithfully

 

Reviews

[*** Hey Jude***]

Since you asked for idea's here are some thoughts for your acrostic. After reading your other work I thought of these emotions. I'm sure when you are ready you will find the words you need to finish this piece of work that has great potential. ~ Jude :-)


Can I ever find a way to let go of what was
Of this seemingly realistic infatuation
Freedom from this ache I genuinely need myself to allow
Faithfully I grasp my only warmth, as I dream of autonomy knowing�

Every sip keeps me distracted from life's troubles
Everyone and everything may come and go quickly but addiction hangs around faithfully

[Alyssa Dufresne]

"Everyone and everything may come and go quickly but addiction hangs around faithfully"

Now I'm not tremendously addicted seeing as I'm only thirteen, but that is just too true. Good work.

[Clarisse Nanoit]

This acrostic is cute. I know LOTS of people can relate. I don't know why there aren't more reviews for this, but it deserves some attention. Great work! Thanks, again, for entering, and BEST OF LUCK! :P
KH