(Jorio) Why I did not apologize�

(Jorio) Why I did not apologize�

A Poem by Imperfection
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�Sorry doesn�t make a dead man alive�...If you agree with this proverb, then you will understand. This is not fictional.

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I did not apologize,

Because sorry wasn't enough,

To restore your past,

To rebuild your trust.

© 2008 Imperfection


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Man, I soo get this. Great, great piece here....you have summed it all up in 4 little lines. Love it! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great Write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well done. Sometimes apologies just don't cut the ice and sometimes actions speak louder than words.
Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like a couple of times I've had in my long and complicated relationship with my fiance. Very well done. Short and to the point. In just four lines you've said it all.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW... that was the most profound simple piece. So much said so simply. And I believe I know exactly what you meant.... someone cannot take back the damage that was already done. Excellent work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 13, 2008
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