Gardenia

She moves in waves
in circles
she moves
Gardenia
black hair
my festival is red

Stunned
and time is up
fight or flight
music
I'll fight
I'll grab her now
we'll spin
our breath is sore

The heat is burning
her fingertips
making sounds
burning

Her inner self
her intuition
scanning faces
and she knows
a face in the scene
not just a face
my face
is her way out

Fading
all the sounds
are numb
loud
yet numb

This night
already dead
giving birth
to a day
giving birth
to us

Reviews

[TamerQtaish]

Damn suz,
Didn't know you were such a good writer,
I guess there are many things I don't know about yet?

Anyway its been forever sis,
Hope to catch up with you soon,
All the best regards,
Tamer

[Erin Phoenix]

:) Great job! I enjoyed this very much.

Keep up the good work.

Keep me posted on new work!