You followed a lie

You followed a lie

A Poem by Amal N

I saw you, with the tears in your eyes;

Looking through the window, waiting the sun to rise;

Look what you've put yourself into, by believing her lies;

It was too easy for you to leave me for her and say goodbye;

 

Don't cry, there is nothing your tears could do;

You followed a lie that will never get true;

Turn your back and find another place to go to;

Because in my heart, there is no place for you.

© 2014 Amal N


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Interesting rhyme scheme aaaa, bbbb. I like the concept of following a lie...it relates well to the action of leaving.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Opps. Angel's very angry..may be, demons make her much bother asking appointments for spending some time at heaven with an angel or much angels.

Demons always lie because it's their first priority to speak lie cus, if they don't then what's a worth of angels? cus, angels teach demons to not to speak lie n how to live beautiful with smile along with the scent of angels in this beautiful worldwide.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amal N

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I love your comment :)
Thanks for reading :)

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Just a girl with so many dreams and so little time. I love writing poems and stories and would take any advice or opinion about my writings since English isn't my native tongue :) more..

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