Couri Intrecciati

Soft red petali di rosa

Make a path to your soul.

I follow the trail

To make myself whole.

You let amore in

without hesitation.

Your arms embrace me

Your yearnings are patient

The vasca da bagno

Is romantically lit.

Bathing in love

We bask and we sit.

The perfumo di calore

Infiltrates my skin.

I'm lost in the moment

I'm yours once again.

your kiss inebriante

as our bodies collide.

Two become one

My soul is your bride.

Tuo per sempre

Til the end of time.

Blessed with your love

Two hearts entwined.

Author's Note

petali di rosa = rose petals
amore = love
vasca da bagno = bathtub
perfumo di calore = scent of warmth
inebriante = intoxicating
Tuo per sempre = Yours forever

Thought it would be different to throw in some italian. its such a beautiful language

Reviews

[Shelby]

I loved that you put in the Italian. It added some romance and rhythm that really upped this already beautiful poem. A mixing of the languages, like a mixing of two people. Lovely. Your rhymes were good, not hackneyed at all, and the movement was consistent, which is so rare in my readings. Very beautiful subject and expression. Loved it.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I loved the fact you used italian to express this wonderful poem you have truly inspired me with this piece thank you for sharing I really enjoyed the flow of this poem and I cant wait to read more

100/100

[Heather D]

i loveeee it! i love that the first line of each stanza is in italian!!! it adds so sass and flow and made me read it several times. love it.

[Mark C. Jackson]

I lived in Italy so it's refreshing to read it in a love poem. After all, the Italians are the hottest lovers right?

[Chris38]

The Italian adds an extra dimension to the poem. This was beautiful Ashlie.

[littlelilypurplebride]

This my favorite i understand the lanuage of love so very well, i am a Romantic my self Italian and also spanish is the lanuage of love i knew amore was love i looked at petali thought it was petal and rosa was rose you have inspired me abit this was amazing my half sister even though i never say she is cause shes my flesh in blood herband my half brother are part Italian we have the same mom just not the same dads are you Italian ? i am a mixed mutt like my bro and sister i am the youngest sibbling well i am favoriting this i just love this, i just love, love. god bless lily

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

Very nice infusion of Italliano and English.... Superb write and the flow was Marvellous Excellent write!