Besties

Bestfriends are the kindred spirits we're lucky to know.

Some Senryus about

Bestfriends - the kindred spirits 

we're lucky to know.

Boys are "whatever,"

but bestfriends are forever.

That's the way it is.

We tell our secret

fantasies - that we exchange

in sworn secrecy.

Bestfriends: the girls you

only stay mad at briefly - 'cause

you've news for them!

A bestfriend would push

you into your crush and yell

"get some!" then run.

Reviews

[John Cardwell]

Cool! Senryu - new to me, a cousin to a haiku, interesting. Good discipline to maintain the required form and still have it read naturally. Insightful. And funny! Thanks for sharing!

[anais.vionet]

Thank you =]

[Mr. D]

Ah, the ignorance of youth. Best friends, huh? This is a cute piece, but it shows a staggering lack of worldly wisdom. It shows you put people in far too high of a regard, a prospect that will likely come back to bite you later on. Oh, and one more thing...keep an eye on your boyfriend if you have one or you might find your "bestie" has had his baby. Or you might end up being played when both of them get together behind your back...wayyy too much faith in people...

[anais.vionet]

WOW! THAT is out of the blue. Don't be so "sunny side up," for heavens sake. =p

[Mr. D]

It is out of the blue, but life moments often do not leave time to react before they happen.

Also, I am not a sunny side up egg. I am a poachec egg. In that I steal the false comfort of illusions from others and give them harsh, painful reality in return.

[anais.vionet]

I bet you fun at parties.. and funerals.