Oral Diarrhea (part one)

An unfinished poem after a session of writer'so block.....

Law enforcement sounds both arrogant and ignorant when they have the nerve to say
that crime does not pay.
I'm here to tell you it does.
Or at the least, it will get you laid.
Oral Diarrhea is what comes from my mouth when I tire of the sick and depraved sort of way that humans use evil to spread hate
and it's a game that the Devil loves to play.
I just have to remember that it doesn't matter what you did last week,
you only count for what you did today
'cause wrong or right it's black or white
they believe rather than see the grey.
That's cool for I don't write these words to be remembered long after I'd dead and in a grave
I write them to speak to God because
I was a very young child
when I forgot how to pray.......
So now you know a little about me
but I know I lot about you.
I learned how to read even before pre-school and the words taught me
that most of humanity are likely fools.
It took a few years of bad mental health
to understand that such a category
should certainly include myself.
If I was really smart I'd be using my brain rather than my body to earn material wealth but I never trusted the inherent rhythm
of a system ran by folks who move in stealth.
It is really something that Democracy is nothing but a smoke screen
for those a******s who really run the country.
Social Media makes even a coward
into a man of power
and this hides that which is really coming,
the loss of not only Freedom
but you're very life.
The police everywhere shoot and kill,
sometimes before they even determine
who is wrong or who is in the right.
Sheeeeiiiiit, four Stockton Police drew down
on me for a knife I was carrying legally on my side and this was around noon,
not in the dark of the middle of night.
Not that I'd ever stab a cop;
I'd rather be lying in bed, out of my head
with a beautiful woman
and ounce of great pot.
For now this rhyme is done
and I will finish it later......or maybe not.
Do you really care?

Andrew N. Farrens
February 3, 2015
Stockton, California

Reviews

[Chris]

a good rap style... sharp and clear.

As a side note - don't be feelin invulnerable cause you survived a blues-brush - way too many DON'T and ALL LIVES MATTER! There's too much fear being knowingly bred and spread by powers-that-be officially and just what IS a scared man to do when his mind is screaming "him-or-YOU, him-or-YOU!!" and fyck he's got 15+ shot auto-weapon and it's out and pointed and the finger's on the trig AND THE WEP IS NOT ON SAFE! How the hell do you SHOOT a person as many times as they ALWAYS do and get away with it? How does ANYONE survive 5 or more hits? Combat fatalities....from the mentality. They don't play at "High Noon"...

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. This a hard topic. Do all police officers pay for the sin of the few? I was a soldiers. I knew some soldiers who did terrible thing. They paid for their crimes. Police officers are just men and women doing a hard job. I believe need trained men and women who can fix problems without killing. Bad and good people also. Police officers if wrong. Should pay for their crimes. A powerful blog today. Open the door to a long conversation. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Myenigma]

i like it man,

"That's cool for I don't write these words to be remembered long after I'd dead and in a grave
I write them to speak to God because
I was a very young child
when I forgot how to pray....... "

thats very deep.

[Andrew N. Farrens]

I always feel strange when someone tells me my words are deep. From whatever source these words come from, my mind or some other muse, I don't think they are deep; they just are. Thanks, the fact you took the time to read it means a lot to KAZINSKY........

[Myenigma]

i think its deep for many reasons, like the structure of it, you don't care about being forgotten but you do about forgetting like how to pray. you have a lot of great lines throughout, maybe we can collaborate on something.

[Tricia O'Brien]

Sick, I dig this. No run around bullshit, just straight to the point and you did so well.

[Andrew N. Farrens]

Thankyou. I've been suffering from a cruel, malicious writers block.....check out Part Two when you can. Again, thanks for reading.......

[Tricia O'Brien]

I feel you, this time of year can jam things up.
I'll give it a look for sure