Breaking Up!

The pain
Drips from my heart
Bleeds into my chest cavity
Filling the emptiness
With viscous liquid
That slows me down
Enveloping me.

Open heart surgery
Cut savagely
At the flesh
Tear back the flaps
Rip out the organ
That rots inside
Sew the skin
Over the gaping hole
Patched not mended.

No heart.
No hurt.

Reviews

[Justin]

Very straight to the point piece, yet so much raw emotion~ Nicely done.

[Praiser]

What a deep hurt , i had to read it again , do wont to make a part 2 to it

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Great write. Interesting wording

[SweetHeart (:]

Thank you so very musch(:

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This is such a good poem, and it's true, no heart, no hurt, well done :)

[Tasha]

This was amazing!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

The pain is like having the heart torn from us, good poem my friend.

[Dushyant Thadani]

Wow this is one really dark and painful work to read. Beautifully written, and shows exactly how raw a writer you are. This is one poem which can strike a lot of pain in a person's heart if he is thinking of breaking up with a girl who loves him dearly or vise versa. Great write. Seriously amazing work.