There once back twice

i wrote this because of my sisters doings....

My winter ended to start a colder year,
I became lost in the snow plaguing this world
The screams you whispered I could not hear
Fading even more, you're just a lil girl.

Your time will not come
The day just started
Go play in the sun.

It is you i wish to see
As sad as it is to know
How hard it is to breath.

What you did, i do not care
mistakes we made and dared to share
how did this world become so unfair?

You brought the boy out in me
to know how it is to see
Another branch from our family tree.

Author's Note

Reviews

[AngelAfterlife]

i LOVE this poem angel.. its very vivid... Good Job :)

[Elaine]

wow i can see what you mean by it being different, but it's good :)

[Brytt]

Just a few notes:
Plageing -> Plaguing
Your (line 4) -> You're
Daired -> Dared
came to be -> become

I like the poem, though. You don't have to change things, but they are recomended.