"Your perfect"

"Your perfect"

A Poem by Starrbitt

he tore off my mask and threw it across the sky
he caught me before i took off running to hide
"your perfect luv" he says kissing me in a tide

© 2011 Starrbitt


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Posted 12 Years Ago


Short but sooo meaningful!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very, very simple. Love the meaning. As I said, this is my FAVORITE type of love that I drabble with.

Posted 12 Years Ago


just enough detail and image here to carry the poem. Great expression.

Posted 12 Years Ago


it kinda rhyems alot...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Starrbitt
Starrbitt

Oakhill, WV



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