** angel bitten **

** I should of figured someone this perfect would eventually throw me down,give me that sick twisted look than kick me around like a last award winning pony **

He took my heart,played it like his guitar,than shatter'd it in the dark

He took a swing,kissed me for a moment,than hit me with everything

I scream'd,shouted,in my world gone clouded,but your hand was never found

now i'm crawling in pain
bleeding next to the rain
weeping to the insane

** I should have known he was one of the angels gone bad. Perfect smile,horror bite. Now i'm forever bitten,scar'd. How will I ever trust again?
I'm suffocating in venom. **

Reviews

[Starrbitt]

haha thanks...that really boosted my writing confidence :] ....

[Rose of Gondor]

err.....kind of scary..... O.o *gulps* beauitufl though. I envy you! You can do so much with poetry T.T!!! I can't make anything rhyme. *sniffles* you got talent!