i dont know

Its about my ex from Louisiana i still feel for him but he is the 1st guy i loved

I will smile for you
I will still love you
All i want is to be yours again
but
You love her
I understand that
Tears will Fall
But you then at all
I will smile for you
Because i love you
You hurt me when we said goodbye
But i cant be your again
You dont see me like that anymore
So.......
I'll smile for you
I'll giggle when i talk to you
I'll tell you i love you when i see you
I'll talk to u as much as i can
But..... I'll find someone
I dont really need to be with you
Im only 18
I have a long time before i die
I have time to find love :D
and i know i will  :D

Author's Note

tell me what u think:D

Reviews

[Joe Legg]

swell(=

[nothing]

It is a good one. Keep it up.

SGW

[Riathon]

Very well written. Very grown up and mature attitude!

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Well first off good poem i loved how it flowed and how this piece really connected to me.. Second i think you could still write much better poems with more feeling in to it but this one is still really good..

~SK

[Dark Empress]

I like this. It's a good poem.

[Catherine Parks]

I really like this poem. It describes a lot of feelings i have had myself, so I can relate to it.