The Seed

What is this seed that they have planted?

Reviews

[Orange]

Fears......................

[Arundass TP]

Thought provoking poem. Really interesting writing style you have. good work.

[light and ashes]

Thank you!

[Broken.]

I often find myself asking the same question about a lot of things... but what could this be? The mystery plays a role I feel. Is the picture used the one that inspired you?

[light and ashes]

Yes....it is meant to be an ambiguous write..an enigma. The meaning is up to the reader.

[Broken.]

Well then this has been beautifully executed, my friend (:

[Pennywriter]

This line feels like an evocation of of growth, such as the upbringing of children by their parents.

[light and ashes]

Interesting... food for thought.

[Tania Mo]

Interesting. Like a ritual sacrifice.

[light and ashes]

Hmmmm... definitely not what I thought of when I wrote this, but sure..why not?

[Fran Marie]

hmm a picture
worth a few thoughts
to me this is the
seed of depression
I know it well
as I have watered
it many times
with tears
nice write

[Andrew Nelson Stewart]

The curiosity of what happens to you when fate is unknown. The destiny which one plants and hoping for a harvest to feed your old soul of times and happiness. Yet I feel nostalgic of reading such rarity it's beautiful how you drive the fears into wonderment.. pondering the very essence of life and how your existence relates. So many ways to go with this piece, I've certainly enjoyed this poem. Keep writing sincerely your friend in writing and life

[Neville]

... you ask a question that in all likelihood will have as many relevant answers as you have viewers .. and then some .. I like the question, the image and your originality ..

[light and ashes]

That was on purpose...... thank you.

[Paul Bell]

I think it's Trumpy up to his old tricks.
Gracious in defeat. I doubt it.

[barleygirl]

I find it interesting how some of your reviewers assume abuse is involved. Maybe this is a woodsy nymph who's been crawling in the mud after the first balmy rain, soaking in the miracle & exhilaration of it all. It almost appears as if she's sitting on a nest, which caused me to think about whether she's the mommy bird or the baby bird. This is the utmost of photojournalism becuz this can be taken in such diverging directions by all who ponder it (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[light and ashes]

I really love your review.
It is definitely open to interpretation.