Receipt

Receipt

If I sold the World my soul,

I bet it wouldn't even be good enough to give me a receipt.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Tragic, pithy - says so much even though superbly brief.

[light and ashes]

Thank you so much, emmajoy!

[emmajoygreen]

Is always best to sleep on, rather than wake from a beautiful dream, don't you think!?

[Chris Shaw]

The value of human life appears to be getting less. No receipt required. What a sad state of affairs. A little brevity which conjures up strong emotions. Happy Sunday my friend.

Chris

[light and ashes]

Happy Sunday, dear Chris. I hope that you enjoy it.

[light and ashes]

Also, as always, of course...thank you for reading.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome. Always a pleasure to visit your pages.

[light and ashes]

Thank you, sincerely, Chris.

[Lisasview]

Oh gosh... now that puts wonder into my brain... this is quite clever!!

Lisa, now in Spain

[light and ashes]

Thank you!!!! I am so glad to hear from you, and how much you enjoyed it!

How is Spain? I hope it is nice.

[Lisasview]

We love living here... Originally from So. Calif. on the beach...
Nearly 3 years here...
read moreWe love living here... Originally from So. Calif. on the beach...
Nearly 3 years here...
Lisa

[light and ashes]

That is amazing. So glad to hear you are doing well, and that you are loving your life in Spain..

[Lisasview]

Yes, it definitely is… I just say it is another adventure!

[light and ashes]

That's awesome!

[Lisasview]

For sure....
Thank you...
Lisa

[light and ashes]

you're very welcome

[joshua deathdealer]

It's nice to see that people are still writing on here. These days it would be a email receipt at the very least. (:

[light and ashes]

Oh my god. It is so nice to see you. Where have you been?

[joshua deathdealer]

Thanks. I've been okay. I work alot more these days.. and I have been writing music lately, but I do stop in from time to time. It's been awhile. How have you been?

[light and ashes]

I've been...
It's some really interesting years..
but I am so glad to see you here again.
I thought about you from time to time over the years, and wondered what happened to you.

[joshua deathdealer]

That's very kind. Life happens and it can be rough.. I'm thankful we are still alive and here. Hopefully I can find time to upload some new stuff. (:

[light and ashes]

It does, indeed, my friend.
That would be amazing.

[Betty Hermelee]

A very strong statement; and I believe if you sold your soul or my soul or anyone's souls to the world, trust me it wouldn't matter, because we are all just little specks in a huge universe, and we contribute so little in the big picture, that nothing would change, the world would still be the same....unfortunately....
Great for discussion...
Best, B

[light and ashes]

I think I wrote this as a statement of how heartless I believe the world to be..
but sitting here now, I realize that demanding the world to have a heart is not only senseless but stupid.

[Betty Hermelee]

I love your response
Beat, B

[light and ashes]

Thank you.

[duff]

I love the title. Blunt and take it anyway you want to. So much attitude and i don't give a damn. Dark hearts are plentiful. Nice work. Grinning.

[light and ashes]

Sometimes that is really just how I feel..
Blunt and dont give a damn.

[Neville]

............................... take my word for it, then the world will have gone crazy .. 🐧

[light and ashes]

It already is, my friend.
Thank you for stopping by.

[Neville]

.................. my pleasure ma'am

[light and ashes]

:) .................

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I bet you're right. An old friend of mine told me as I was enjoying the sunset "The world would probably charge you for it." He was right too lol.

[light and ashes]

He was lol. Thank you for understanding.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Yes we often feel we don’t amount to much
But you are underprice checking and undervaluing your self you are a Gods creation unique

Great poem though

[light and ashes]

I know....
It is just an observation and what I think about this World.
I find it in many ways to be evil..
It takes, it takes, it takes..
and it almost never gives.


Tell me, lady, respectfully....
Can you tell me that I am wrong?

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

No you are not wrong
But we still need to see the good too
Nature etc

[light and ashes]

You are absoultely right..
It is very hard for me, sometimes.

[willweb]

May I ask why you feel that way?

[light and ashes]

Because it seems sometimes all it does is take....
as well as people..
it (they) hardly ever give anything.

[light and ashes]

And at the moment, I am feeling deeply angry and resentful.

[willweb]

Sorry that you are feeling that way. Here's hoping each new day for you is a better day.

[light and ashes]

I am moody...
and sensitive.
It is one my best and worst qualities..
but regardless of anything,
I still see this as mostly being the truth.

[willweb]

Ok...I understand. : )

[light and ashes]

Thanks..... :)