I will dance forever

Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Tovli's Ten Words ~ "A Double 10/60" = . Each phrase equals one ten "words" and your poem/story can only have 60 words total: first time/ I will dance/ all the way/ moon/ field on/ simply sleep/ what do you see/ I jump/ make tea/ su

 

As I jump around

What do you see?

 

Nothing but your misery

Surface like small ideas:

Make tea

Like the first time we met

Simply sleep

Like the lost time I saw you

 

I will dance forever

To all sounds created 

Expressing love

Field on communication

Spinning around us

From inside the throat chakra

All the way to the moon!

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

A good response to the challenge! I like your line "Like the lost time I saw you." At first I thought maybe you meant "last," but "lost" makes more sense.

[papaed]

Your poem IS a dance. A difficult criteria carried to its ultimate. So glad you accept these challenges.

Peace and Love,
papaed

[Tovli]

excellent flow, almost a rhyme! tovli

[Gandré]

you are so strong when it goes like building a poem to a special rule. I never can do this! Wonderful poetry!!

[Helena]

"I will dance forever
To all sounds created
Expressing love
Field on communication
Spinning around us
From inside the throat chakraAll the way to the moon!"

What a gorgeous write Angi. Loved the way you incorporated the "ten phrases"
in this. Well done! ~ Helena

[Tony Hwilka]

Very interesting, Did you mean lost time or last time? Tony