tummy butterfly

Write a poem using the ten (10) words: create, pattern, twirl, window, butterfly, senses, breath. Tea, light, bare - Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Tovli's Ten words -

Wrong pattern hurts

Deep down inside out

 

Bare kind of choices

Create step-by-step instructions

Breath in, breath out

Take a cup of tea

 

Open the window of options

Twirl actions wheels

Transform tummy butterfly

In wings to fly

A light to show the way

Senses of relaxing

 

Reviews

[EileenMarie]

I like what you have done with your 10 words :)........ great write!

[MOON]

Lovely what you have created out of the words . Good write.

[khalid]

an optimistic pom, a nice sun ray in the darkness of night. very nicely simply written. i really enjoyed it so much, keep on the great work

[Helena]

Wonderful poem for the contest. The best use of the "Ten words" certainly flowed off your pen. Thank you for submitting this beauty

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Yours sounds like very good advice. Those tummy butterflies are never welcome here, but I certainly lived long enough to have felt the flutters too often. :) Sharon

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A sensical and provocatice notion of simplistic notions and turns, well done good read.