are we there yet ??

are we there yet ??

A Poem by angry_pandit
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just my quirks to help me get off my lazy a*s :D... funny how we need pain to remind ourselves of pleasure, and in pleasure how easily we forget all the pain we endured and all the lessons it taught. not happening today... not happening any other day, h

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no time to waste no time to cry

no wandering about, no room to hide

in my opinion you better start looking straight

this life will get over, while doing figure eight

 

get up on your heels and start your day

or again at night we'll have to cry down to pray

no more is the meaning of hardship applied

let hardwork be your new found bride

 

caress and cuddle all you like all night and day

please or hussle, allow it to guide your way

its too late to apologize, it too late to realize

now only in silence can we treasure our prize

 

go on about, what is it that you do

get on with it, make your dreams come true

every morning make sure to find the brave in you

also hola at the pain, you need to return, its due !

 

no fame no glory this fight, is fought

no lust no worry on my mind i got

my mind my body have all found thier wight

force my way, i'm heading straight

 

no one can stop, its time has come

lets get on with it then, lets get it dun ...

 

 

© 2009 angry_pandit


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no fame no glory this fight, is fought

no lust no worry on my mind i got

my mind my body have all found thier weight

force my way, i'm heading straight

Love that stanza, it speaks volumes, apart from the few SPAG errors, this is a very well written piece. It has angst without being too dramatic, its light without being fluffy. I think that you have done this topic justice.

Merveilleux!



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i am a nobody. living in a world as a somebody.i want to meet everybody. i am a 25 year old guy, don't act my age most of the time though. there are hardly things i don't like, i am somehow born to.. more..

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