blurt !!

dont read this, its non sense

 

here we go again,

same old day same old s**t, again !

nothing new that really happens

no great news, no one's laafing

i miss the chirp and the noise around

every morning a different sound

whats the purpose and the meaning to this life

where everything can be wrong and anything can be right

so it comes down to whats your mood today

did you have a pleasant night? planning to have a good day?

no matter what you think, its not going your way, anyday

your just a passenger, lost on this local train

midst all the crowd trying to breathe, cool and calm

whoever knows, about this creature that lurkes around

clueless and jobless as one can be

totally pathetic, as everyone can see

the momentum of thought, is a challenging game

the trick is to find all the words sounding same

you can say any s**t and make it sound better

if it doesnt work, you can always apologize later

that seems to work for these human beings around

they dont seem to care, not everyone is mentally sound

i look outside to the world as i pray

should i thank you lord, for again a lovely day ? 

life's lost its colour, everythings grey

thats what you get when you try to get your way

your left stranded in the desert somewhere, lost

trying to come back to life, at any cost

your money is no good in the desert

what are you blind ?

you cant always get your way

someday's its gotte be mine

i expect you to just sit back and relax

dont worry too much, just observe at the max

your controlling rights have anyways been revoked

you died last night, you sold your dream, before you awoke

you told them what you wanted, and now you wont get it

how many times must i ask you to shut up, you are pathetixc

someday for this, a prize you will have to pay

someday atleast you will have to do exactly as i say

no more fighting me, you know it is wrong

you know how much i love you, i am writing you a song

go die another day, coz oday belongs to me

i will decide how today is going to be

i cant wait around for you get off your a*s

i aint listening to anymore of your jazz

i have made up my mind, today is my lucky day

its going to be my moulding, its going to be my clay

so you better go back to sleep, coz i need to work on our dreams

go smoke your pot, try to live with them greens

dont get offended, i only speak of your truth

if you sow the seed, so shall you get its fruit

dont hide behind, saying i am an envoirmentalist

dont hide your laze, by saying i am conservationist

.you are big good for nothing, atleast today i can see

you are rooted to this place, no worse than a tree

i dont know when tomorrow is gonna come

you go back to sleep, till then i'll trying talking to the sun

my god, my saviour, i hope i dont disappoint you by what i say

i am just being silly, its just one of those days

you know i love working, i am never gonna quit

dont bother my jerkings, its only for me to stay fit

non stop bundle of nonsense, how random can i be

i am even planning to post this, for everyone to laaf and see

i think its ok, someone needs to bring back that smile

no one seems to care anymore, ready to go an extra mile

i have break all these notions that are brewing around me, in the world

god if you are listening, i think i need a girl

hey dont try to judge me, i only say what most people think

but i say things mostly to surprise you, dare you not to blink

the shock value is far more exciting then those romantic stupid feelings

this keeps them in line, makes them easier when dealing

is there a point to this, are we even heading somewhere

stop wasting time, i am getting angry, i swear

allright alright, i get your point, dont rub it in

you can take your productive thoughts and trying shoving it in

i aint doing anything till i feel the need to

i aint opening my mouth, even to breathe through

 

 

now thats a blurt , if nothing else :P ....

enough from me, lets get back to work..... jerk !! :D

Reviews

[angry_pandit]

hi,

well nuffin was intentional with this post anyhow, i was just trying to talk myself back to work, i have to beg and plead with myself everyday, and these are somewhat the thoughts that go into action... :P

i still dun kno whats SPAG , i am highly inclined to rap, comes naturally but aint good at it.
so did u get the flow of the conversation ? hehe... there are actually 2 different sides of me talking to each other.... if you did, bravo !

thnx for the review.... been readin your work aswell, its very insightful most of the times... tc

[Call Me Cash]

Other than the SPAG errors, I liked it, you need to be careful for repetition, but who am I to say, I am the repetition queen!
It sounds like a rap almost...was that intentional?