stuck in a moment

life's a circle and karma is your radius, expand how much ever you will, and it will always come back to you.

looks like i'll have to get it together

i'm just stuck in a moment and cant get out of it

no dreams are ever fulfilled without

you trying hard and going after it

 

cant seem to feel any better now

coz i'm stuck in a moment and cant get out of it

no pain seems to have any effect on me

coz i been through the most, still cant get enough of it

 

just like rains in october, pouring

sitting by your window, just cant get out of it

no more love's coming your way this time

coz i'm stuck in a moment, and cant get out of it

 

my mind seems to be wandering in the clouds

dreaming of flying, escaping out of it

too tired of cursing and lying

trying and crying

my tears dont seem to stop

toungue's in a knot and cant seem to get out of it

 

i'd pray for forgivness my holy father

sins too many, cant figure out a list

i'd pray only for a fresh begining

this life's seems a waste, cant seem to get out of it

 

i have lost my way in the woods again

its a jungle out there, cant seem to get out of it

hold my hand, help me keep it together again

i promise to work my way out of this

 

-  i'll never give up, if you never give up on me. please.

 

 

Reviews

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I really like this poem. The repetetiveness of the 'can't get out of it' lines throughout really bring this to life and I couldn't help imagine it as a song I like, (The Ruts- 'I'm in a rut'). I think that a lot of readers will be able to relate to this on varying personal levels- for myself it reminded me of times of personal trauma, relationship breakdowns, the grief of bereavement, general melancholy, to name, but a few. I particularly liked the ending that asked for the support of a loved one to stand by your side to enable you to help yourself through the tribulations that had rendered you in this state of angst. Enjoyed this read, take care, spence