KASAM

KASAM 

Ee humsafar

Dhund raha hun tujhko

Manzil meri tujhse judi

Tu saath rehna mere

Tujhko meri kasam

Tujhko mai chahun

Zindagi bataun

Manzil tujhko dikhaun

Chahat ke pal mai

Agar bhuljaun

Yaad dela dena mujhko

Meri kasam

Tere intazaar ki ghadi chal rahi hai

Meri manzil ab duur lag rahi hai

Tu meri akhino se jaa rahi hai

Tu...

Zindagi meri..

Ab kyun...

Jaa rahi hai

Iss safar mai..

Mujhko akele

Chodh ke jaa rahi hai..

Yaad dila de us kasam ko

Zindagi se jo ki thi..

Tu meri manzil thi..

Kasam mei puri hui

Reviews

[Surya]

Actually...I dont know much hindi, it's not my tongue..
But after reading your poetry i wanna make my hindi better, to write few...
And coming to your poetry at it's words my eyes stuck...a promise to be kept...
Bahut acha likha gaya hai...mujhe khub pasand aaya..:)

[horizon]

how could you not know Hindi ???

[Keertivardhan Kukreti]

@surya thank you for your appreciation.
I don't think it has to be a in a common language to share what you feel..to expose yourself...the only thing I believe in is believing in myself.

[APOORVA]

awesome..
ishrat-e-qatra hai dariya me fanaa ho jana
dard ka hadd se guzarna hai dawa ho jana

urpain has become ur words

[Keertivardhan Kukreti]

Jo
Zindagi ke daria mai dupki lagate hain...
Manzil ko raah bana dete hain...
Ishq ki lahar mai taerte hai...
Aur khuda ki chadar mai sote hain..
Vo shaayar hain

[APOORVA]

satya vachan...