The Lady Night

The Lady Night

A Poem by Signet
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Came up with a poem after a long long time... hope you like it.. :)

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The misted veil of darkness hung,

As she danced and her cerulean

Slowly fading into ebony. For she,

Swayed and swayed with her twirling robe,

Twinkling and shining with the diamonds of dark,

And the enigma of her shining stones

Mesmerised those who looked, inspired the love

Of young lovers, enthralled.

Her little deliberate movements, spreading stillness on to the Earth

And her breath lulled the mortals to sleep,

The soft footfall and the arms so poised,

Wove a dream of the summer land.

And she danced on, The Lady Night,

She danced away into another day...

© 2010 Signet


Author's Note

Signet
Hello, if you're reading this poem and reviewing it... Thank you :)
Well, I came up with a poem after so long. It might not be very good, but thanks for taking out your time and reviewing it :D

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WoW--"For she, Swayed and swayed with her twirling robe,
Twinkling and shining with the diamonds of dark,
And the enigma of her shining stones
Mesmerized those who looked, inspired the love
Of young lovers, enthralled..."--i love this part:)
this is a magnificent poem-with wonderful imagery-
this is a beautiful piece of poetry:):-)


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Truly a beautiful piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what else will i say than a wonderful poem...nice imagery...nice metaphors

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WoW--"For she, Swayed and swayed with her twirling robe,
Twinkling and shining with the diamonds of dark,
And the enigma of her shining stones
Mesmerized those who looked, inspired the love
Of young lovers, enthralled..."--i love this part:)
this is a magnificent poem-with wonderful imagery-
this is a beautiful piece of poetry:):-)


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was really beautiful!!!

I don't know what to say but I loved it

Great work!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poem is beautiful. The mystery of night and day always can create stories and emotion. I like your story. You create a feeling of peace and dance. A excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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