Melting Ice Heart

Utter  bewilderment,

It's what I felt,

at the end of that statement,

when your heart melted.

Completely unexpected,

but just the right time,

to break down your walls

in a blink of an eye.

 

All that you once built,

that mask that never left your face,

at last destroyed,

with indescribable grace.

 

You confessed your secrets,

everything you feared,

but not once regretting

that amount of tears.

 

Comfort is what you needed,

I hope I gave it to you,

because I'm not judgmental,

I wish you had knew.

 

Now that you're happy,

you struggled for good,

but I dream it was earlier,

that you stopped being misunderstood.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Hope and concern is the key to life. I learn the hard way to be kind. Better to hold silence than create separation. I like the story and how the assistance was given with patience and care. No weakness in the excellent poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

[Fadedspeak]

I really enjoyed this poem! The second stanza has to be my favorite as it's the one I can best visualize. Great work, keep it up!

[Tahitia Foggie]

This is really good, I love it!

[Sami Khalil]

"Comfort is what you needed,

I hope I gave it to you,

because I'm not judgmental,

I wish you had knew.



Now that you're happy,

you struggled for good,

but I dream it was earlier,

that you stopped being misunderstood."

A very nice write. I like the ending the most...:)