Rainy Night

This moment when you're walking down the streets while it's raining and all the emotions come back with hope slipping into them.

The blurry vision,

the perfume of humidity,

the dazzling night

whitening the darkness.

The raindrops falling,

breaking the perfection 

of the puddle's reflection,

falling into your face.

The sky cries with you,

accompanies your sadness,

leans on your shoulders

not letting you feel lonely.

The lazy sound of rain,

into the quietness of the night,

the freedom it inspires,

the hope it makes you feel.

Hope at knowing

that you might not be alone,

that someone is with you,

that you will be happy.

This dream-like scenery,

is the push you needed,

to fall into the conclusion 

that a painless moment exists.

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Donald]

Very visual and moving piece, very good.

[eun su]

i liked the way you used the metaphors to describe such a scene, and generally i liked the topic even more. good work.

[A. Garcia Sagarra]

Thanks for your kind words :)