The Truth About Depression

this is all me, no edits.

Sometimes pain and sadness

Goes deeper than you know

You turn around,

And suddenly there's a hole.

A hole where your trust should be.

A hole when you'd learned to believe.

You start falling apart

Because you have a hole for a heart.

Your eyes start to water, your tears start to fall.

You suddenly wish you were nothing at all.

The night sneaks up on you

It makes you feel weak

Your chest gets so heavy,

You can't even speak. 

The pain hits you hard

And you fall to your knees

You feel alone, broken, and scared.

I know what it's like

To be easily replaced.

I know how it feels

To be completely erased. 

Just remember you're worthy 

That you make someone's day

Just remember your beauty

When love seems to fade. 

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

I know how it feels to be replace by someone else, I know the pain of being alone and falling apart, your poems have an enormous ability to put feelings in the reader's heart... The poem flows very well with so much thoughts about depression and the ending was just fabulous with the hope you have entered into it... Such a great work... Hats off...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[914]

loved it .great wording and nice touch and i do understand depression all too much. I WOULD HAVE NOT NOTICE YOU BUT BEND OREGON IVE BEEN THROUGH ANY WAYS I DO LOVE IT......

[Livi Mariotti]

This is amazing, I can completely relate and I am here for you.

[sabine]

Wow, this poem is really powerful! You did a really good job. I especially liked the last stanza, it's very encouraging.