When You Are Hurt

When You Are Hurt

A Poem by mamabear

When you are hurt

We are hurt

When you cry

We cry

When you are in pain

We are in pain

When you are sad

We are sad

When you cut

We feel the cut

When you ache

We ache

When you are in agony

We are in agony

When you are suffering

We suffer

When you are depressed

We are depressed

When you are emotional

We are emotional

When you panic

We panic

And when you love

The whole world lights up and sings

And when you are happy

The world is a happier place

© 2010 mamabear


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The way I interpret this is that "we" refers to parents and "you" is their child. All you said is precisely true of how I feel about that relationship. When my youngest son had to get his wisdom teeth cut out, I told him that I'd gladly trade places and endure the pain for him if there was any way possible. I meant it, too.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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People say love can cause sympathy pains and feel other people feelings abit like twins in a way, That the whole part of having a mental illness is you have good and bad days specially with bi polar high and lows you write from the heart and express yourself in words and then into a poem tremendous work

Dalebear

Posted 13 Years Ago


The way I interpret this is that "we" refers to parents and "you" is their child. All you said is precisely true of how I feel about that relationship. When my youngest son had to get his wisdom teeth cut out, I told him that I'd gladly trade places and endure the pain for him if there was any way possible. I meant it, too.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 1, 2010
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mamabear
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Birmingham, United Kingdom



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A Poem by mamabear