FOOL'S GOLD by ACE

this poem got a lot of view and likes on my blog spot I present a humorous masterpiece to the world of writing.

What ya see their Tom
I see,I see something insight
Something gold
Wow, look how bold
is that gold.
Oh yes,but that gold,looks to
be on something mold.
Hey,just how that gold got their Tom.
I don't know but this gold is bold and sits on
something mold.I'm Sold!
Sold
Well,go scratch it Tom.
This gold,That gold
It scratches green
It shown GREENN!!!!!
Wait let me see, why green Tom?
I don't know
However according to Tom and his friend,are living in Southern
California where some gold was found.Bare in mind, that gold doesn't
ever scratch green.So what Tom and his friend had discovered was a minimal size
piece of pyrite.Tom kills his friend and sold the fool's gold that lied in the mold
which appeared bold.
Someone later found that gold was fake,as Tom tried to get away
A women named Jane fired a shot which him lay
Jane went on with the fool's gold scheme
and how she got away, you can only dream
AAS

Reviews

[marytownsend]

Great story-poem! There's a lot of fool's gold out in the world demanding our attention, it's up to us to decide what's real!

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like the write and color scheme

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of fool's gold in this world. A good story with a very good ending. Some folks may seek revenge. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote