The fall before bloom!!

L.Y.

I was trying to shine,

in the glorious day.

Forgot to be a noctilucent,

that the sheen stars used to say.

Stuck in the crowded hallway,

No one would listen,

The mute symphony-

My heart notes play.

Believe in thyself,

How can I?

I am lost in the gloomy forest,

Striving for a comforting plume,

Catch me,

Perhaps,

I would fall before I bloom.

Reviews

[M. J. Smith]

A heart worn on your sleeve..
Be extra careful when riding a tram. It would endlessly sad to see that heart knocked off. Again, beautiful poem.

[Anuja Sharma]

Thank you very much for the halt here.
I feel grateful!!

[M. J. Smith]

It is I whom am grateful for the beauty you bring to this cafe. There is so little beauty in the world any more. Thank you for sharing yours.

[Chris Shaw]

I felt insignificance here, of not being noticed. I felt the fall, but out of ashes......

We grow stronger through the knocks in life. A poem with deep emotion running through its core. I know this flower will bloom beautifully once more.

Lovely work Anuja.

Chris

[Anuja Sharma]

Thank you Chris for the lovely review. Truly appreciate that you stopped by.
😊

[Chris Shaw]

You are most welcome Anuja.

[Just Kim]

Wow, emotional read here, I really like how you express yourself. Nicely written

[Anuja Sharma]

Thank you Kim. Really cant wait to read your writes.
:)

[Betty Hermelee]

To me this is a play on words: the word fall as in the season; the budding of a flower which falls before it blooms. Also the fall of person (not literally) who is trying to make life more bearable; no one would listen to the sadness befalling. nice use of words and images.
Best, Betty

[Anuja Sharma]

Thank you so much Betty for stopping by and for such a detailed and kind review. I am glad you liked it. 😊