I want to write

I want to write On what you did to me On what I felt back then And on what it still has on me But my hands… They feel numb… They can’t move They want to… but back then You used to make them move With your love, When I wrote for you Those were the best I wrote And probably the last I wrote That was actually about me I want to write, On myself… and you You… who aren't here anymore Never was… I want to write, On how hollow I feel On how painful it was When you left… I want to write, On solitude… On myself…

Reviews

[Rahul]

Quite an heartfelt poetry it is... so wrapped & coiled with some trails of un-broken-ness. Funny it's to be saying how love brings two souls close to each other, and how wickedly it even "segregates" 'em from "one-another". Sometimes, love seems to be an enigma of fantasy itself that takes you on cloud nine when you are in love, and throws you straight back at the thrones of clowns when it's gone. Such a poetry it is! Very obvious with words. It's been so long reading your work. I would be looking forward to reading your work, shortly.

[Stephen]

That's a very good idea to get your free time spending with the writing. I love the way you started the write n ended it up with the greatest description of the poem.

Stay blessed!

[Anusha Prabhu]

Thank you Stephen. Glad you liked it :)

[Stephen]

It's all my pleasure, Anusha. It is even an honour to me to read your beautiful stuffs.

read moreIt's all my pleasure, Anusha. It is even an honour to me to read your beautiful stuffs.

Hope to read some of your more stuffs in a day.
Keep posting, pretty girl.

[Stephen]

N hope to read some of your more stuffs in a day. So keep posting, pretty girl.

[Anusha Prabhu]

Thank you Stephen.. lol :D :)

[Stephen]

It's been an honour too to have an angelic thanks :)
Stay beautiful you pretty girl, prettiest Anusha :)

[Free_Soul]

Simple yet so deep !! a well penned poem :) :)