her paper world

unfolding her hands

she stretches a paper trail

hanging the stars in their place

she folds and bends

creating skies of paper mache

she tears them away

all her beautiful origami

ripping and throwing them astray

falling to raging fires

they burn and they burn

turning to ashes, into piles of sand

her deep breathes softly turning

blowing them far off

they begin making a surface

for our feet to bewalk

dissolving in embers

they churn in the flames

churning and churning

they melt in the rain

falling drops of acid

streaming from her face

eyes facing her world dying

they wash us away

Reviews

[Huggy Bear]

Great piece of work you have right here. Secondly using origami as a metaphor for life is fantastic.