A little about me

I'm not lying when I tell you I feel like I'm lost
It just feels like Im trapped in my thoughts
I am at home, I got my back against the wall
I feel alone I got no one to call
And I'm still on my own because no ones involved
Tell me where do I go when everything falls

My best friend, he turned out to be a fake
The real definition of becoming a snake
And I lost my girl to and that was my mistake
I put me above her and it took her place
See I tried to re-date, but it's always a waste
Ever since she left nothing's ever been the same

I guess I'm to blame, can't lie to me
Walk in the room and they start eyeing me
Feeling overwhelmed with my anxiety
So I stay to myself and I overthink quietly
You say you'll be there when I know you won't
And you say you love me when I know you don't

I been loosing faith and my hope
Still haven't found a way I can cope
Told myself never again, never reach out for a hand
Never put trust in a friend, never give up where you stand
I'm suffering and you stand around
And falling so f*****g hard I could smash the ground
Exhausted so much I feel like just passing out
forget it all and what it is all about.

Reviews

[Sand Witch]

Another fantastic piece that brought back both feelings and memories. A great, reflective piece.

[Casey Canon]

You're rhyming style and tone are very well-written. As in the previous review by Sage, the emotion is evident and makes your piece very humanized.

[anxiety99]

Thankyou i appreciate the nice comments.

[Sage Kallen]

Great poem, the passion and emotion behind it really digs deep. I guess everyone has someone they can't forget.