Tell me

Tell me

A Poem by Apatheia
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Really old poem I founddd.

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Tell me that you love me & everything’s okay
Tell me that you’ll hold me & take my pain away
Tell me this is temporary & things will get better soon
Tell me that you think of me when you see the moon
Tell me that you’re mine from now until forever
I’ll tell you how you’re beautiful & I think you’re clever
Tell me that you’ll be here & not just end the pain
Tell me that our first kiss will be in the pouring rain
Tell me that we’ll run away & never look back
Tell me when we leave we’ll walk along the rail road tracks
Tell me that you love me and I mean a lot to you
Because I’ve been meaning to tell you
That I love you, too

© 2012 Apatheia


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Hi Apatheia, it's a nice little poem but feels somewhat led by its rhyme rather than its sentiment. For an old poem it shows your journey.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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