baby, i've got a plan: run away fast as you can.

baby, i've got a plan: run away fast as you can.

A Poem by aphrodite61

i want to lay in the snow and just disappear
i want to be sunny and live with no fear
i want to say it's alright and have it be true
i don't know what i want but i know it's not you.

© 2010 aphrodite61


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I like how the last line contradicts the rest. The entire poem says, "I want, i want, i want" but the last line starts with, "I don't know what i want" it really makes you think what the poem is saying

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aphrodite61
aphrodite61

Vineland, NJ



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sophomore in high school. jersey. writing is the only place where i can whine and not care what people think about it. read my stuff. you might like it. i do :) more..

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