see

 

 

 

 

If I asked someone to open their eyes and look,

after a lifetime of being blind,

would they see it?

Author's Note

I don't know why I like this and why I thought of this, it just came.

Reviews

[Hajime]

I love this. And I think it could mean something different to every one that reads it. Great work!

[BenKeane]

I like this, makes you think about what 'it' is to you.

[Pi]

It's so simple :) Sometimes when poems are short and sweet they stay in our minds more! It's a great poem!

[Jenny Oleinik]

♥
I do like these words too, and I understand about those little fleeting moments - when some words spring into your mind- and then ,they're almost gone, and you dont know where they came from, and when you see them again, it doesnt even feel like they're your own. I like your words.

[speckledbyrd]

This is very intriguing. Good work!