Looking for Perfection

Looking for Perfection

A Poem by arvin

Looking for the perfection of life
i came crawling  and howling
shouting the cries of my mind
but no one sees, no one hears

i climbed the highest stairs
walked the everlasting pathways
swam accross the deepest oceans
but i saw nothing, i found nothing

 i entered every open door
peeked at every spot i find
studied every virtues of life
but there were nothing

Life is so mysterious, so fabulous
annoying, i must say
surviving is a problem, no wonder
living alive is more than a killing punishment.

© 2013 arvin


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Arvin, I can relate to what you've written here. I have been there many times and it is a desperately frustrating place to be. I believe you have expressed your feelings very well. You have written something I can understand.

Posted 6 Years Ago


arvin

6 Years Ago

Than u Damien. i am a fan of your writings, and it is such an honor to receive such a review from u... read more
There is some sentiment and great expression here. Try to use some intricate vocabulary; it will help you express yourself better. I also would like to see some rhyme scheme. Great stuff. Keep writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Added on June 28, 2013
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