Dedication

Dedication

A Poem by Ari
"

My first haiku, ironically enough.

"

All of my haiku

are now belong to you. All.

Congratulations.

 

 

 

© 2008 Ari


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Ari
Comments appreciated.

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Upon rereading this, I have to ask: are you punning on "all your base are belong to us?" Because I didn't notice that the first time.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I'm always amazed what people can accomplish in so few words. I'm a little confused who you're speaking to, though ;-)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good, and cute. I've yet to attempt a haiku...I think of it as requiring a certain patience and attention that I lack. I enjoyed all of your syllables, as I do all of your work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ari
Ari

Lexington, KY



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