Six Word Memoir

Six Word Memoir

A Poem by Ari
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Hopefully, this one will be joined by others.

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You don't win, yet.

I endure.

© 2008 Ari


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Wow. I loved it. I love how you put so much meaning and emotion into so few words. Short, sweet, to the point, and beautiful. Great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I l ike that! You're one of those poet people who never give up. I am that way too!

Sal

Posted 16 Years Ago


Simplicity is the most challenging art. To convey a lot of meaning with a lot of meaningful words is challenging, but common. To convey so much with but a few well chosen words, is profound. Language is funny that way! ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Lovely.

Posted 16 Years Ago


People don't realize how hard it is to write something meaningful and powerful in such few words. You did it beautifully and I hope you can write some more of these.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow. This punched me in the face.

In a good way, of course.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 23, 2008
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Ari
Ari

Lexington, KY



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I'm a fifth-year college student in Secondary English Ed, and I love writing (obviously, or I wouldn't be here). I write mostly poetry about my life, but I know that poetry isn't my strong point, so I.. more..

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