As friends.

No match for that beauty which gets my mind blown,
she stands in between the crowd
but her beauty stands out alone.

I will to remark her with a quote about beauty
But rather I look at her with eyes
Filled with admiration, kind of mutely.

Courage is what I lack at this moment
And her perceptible beauty if not admired would not distinct
Than an unseen bursting Fluorescent.

Inclining my thoughts towards spirit
By taking a chance with fate
Intend to restrain negativity and clear it.

"you look good today" I articulate
Repressing other utters,
Yearning she might co-relate.

She flexes towards me with a smile
Eyes meet like a hap,
They show me roads of diligence Stretching out a mile.

Something more my mind expected
that it is still unaware of. But i perceive,
it happend the way it had to be acted.

Preventing impels
My heart Pounds with little burdens
To obstruct with zeal it tells.

Limiting stupor settles that I have been molding
And refraining desquamate of 'love' from my heart this time
letting them stay with the title 'friends' am already holding.

Reviews

[Eleanor]

Full of raw talent and honesty!
A lot of time we are not able to express our feelings towards someone. We adore each and every feature of them. The only one thing lacking is courage. But dont let time slip away. It never comes back. If you feel something, tell her before its too late.
Another common thing is being labelled as just friends. Sometimes the other person does not feel the same toward us. I could understand and connect with this.
Hope to read more by you :)
Thank you.

[arihant]

Thanks (i'm anonymous) for the review and advice but this is an old poem, I already expressed my liking to her but I ended up being a friend only. To my bad, recently it all blew up into nothing and now we are always, almost ignoring getting into a convo. I sure will post my other poems soon. Thanks once again.

[jo]

Nicely written poem, loved reading it.