Lesson

Lesson

A Poem by armin
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Whatever you think an inspiration, philosophy or anything else.

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Darkness lights up with an ignited wishful hope,
dirt cleans out from a bubbling soap.
Love awakens with an admiring glance,
world seems beautiful feet jump into dance.

Dream is achieved with a grateful imagination,
man may be a hero when he thinks first before action.
Loneliness fills in laying head over mother's shoulder,
nothing can break you if you are strong like a soldier.

Ponder over it, its my suggestion
every line prevails a deep lesson......


© 2015 armin


Author's Note

armin
You know we all have a bit dark side so it's just a philosophy that every problem risen in life has a solve. Whether you are trapped in dark, you have insincerities, you wanna achieve something, you are lonely or if you are weaker. So the poem is a lesson.

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Amazing wisdom in your words.
"Ponder over it, its my suggestion
every line prevails a deep lesson...... "
I agree. A wise person planned for good or bad day. To ensure success. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

armin

9 Years Ago

John you really honour me with your great reviews, you are very kind. Thank you so much.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

It was my luck and honor to read your work and you are welcome.



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Very deep and intense....the message is strong. I love it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thankyou Ana.
Very true my friend great insight,well written

Posted 9 Years Ago


W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

always life is too short to let things get you down your quite welcome
armin

9 Years Ago

so we must make the life useful for ourselves and others. Thanks.
W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

abbsolutely your welcome
I'm so glad we have bubbling soap. I will try to do some good uplifting things to make the day worth it for others. Sometimes when things are good all the time we take it for granted or need to change focus and switch up our routines or way of doing things, to make event what is taken to be mundane more extraordinary

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks Laura, for your comment.
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Gee
Nicely penned armin,thought provoking.

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you liked this one.
Gee

9 Years Ago

You're welcome
back to school in this one as we learn the messages in the lines, i take it as philosophy and your words are rich in their depth, classic poetry :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

thanks Richard for your kind review.
very deep, good poem. Well done, Armin. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks for a nice review.
Love the way you wrote it!
Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Emily you a great person, thanks for dropping your reviews.
Emily

9 Years Ago

Thank you! You made my day!
Very wise and inspiring words my young friend.

Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks Ana for your nice review.
There is a message in each line if we bother to look for it. Nice write. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thanks Kathie, muchly appreciated.

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Added on January 12, 2015
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armin

New Delhi, Delhi, India



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