I NEED YOU BY MY SIDE - A SONG

I NEED YOU BY MY SIDE - A SONG

A Poem by armin
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An improved version of my song I'll walk again. I've totally manipulated it.

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I NEED YOU BY MY SIDE

1st verse. ..

I never thought this would be that hard,
to erase you outta my mind.
It sucks without you babe,
it's draining away my life.
I am breathless so faithless,
I am down against the wall.
Trapped in misery,
I feel so small.

Can't you feel my pain,
I miss you all the time.
I won't believe it's over
I need you by my side.

Chorus. ...

Run your fingers across my skin,
make me feel alive.
I won't believe it's over,
I need you by my side.
Awake me from this haunted sleep,
save me before I die
I need you so badly,
I need you by my side.

2nd verse. ..

Do you remember the first time,
I held you in my hands.
It was a full moon night,
our first kiss, first dance.
And see we were going so perfect,
our love was taking a strong stance.
It could' ve never been ended this way,
if we would' ve given it one more chance.

Can't you feel my pain,
I miss you all the time.
I won't believe it's over
I need you by my side.

Chorus. ..

Run your fingers across my skin,
make me feel alive.
I won't believe it's over
i need you by my side.
Awake me from this haunting dream,
save me before i die.
I need you so badly
I need you by my side.

3rd Verse. ..

Girl,
When you left me in middle of the street,
I cried a river of tears.
My world came crashing down,
I was full of fear.
Can't you feel my pain,
I miss you all the time.
I love you so much,
and I need you by my side.

Chorus. ..

Run your fingers across my skin,
make me feel alive.
I won't believe it's over,
I need you by my side.
Awake me from this haunting dream,
save me before i die.
I need you so badly,
I need you by my side.


Copyright 2015
Written by Armin







© 2015 armin


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armin
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Admin, you are so passionate about your song lyrics. I can't wait to hear music to these!!
Wonderful work as always.

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Welcome back Ana, thankyou for your kind words dear. I missed you and your writings a lot.
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

Thank you armin! :)
Armin: I can tell you put some time into this writing and it shows: I love it all....the chorus is my favorite but the 3rd vs/bridge great as well...I can already hear music when I say it aloud....Fantastic work...truly wonderful....Thank you so much! Dale
Run your fingers across my skin,
make me feel alive.
I won't believe it's over,
i need you by my side.
Awake me from this haunted sleep,
save me before I die
I need you so badly,
I need you by my side...

Posted 9 Years Ago


armin

9 Years Ago

Thankyou Dale, but about music you know i am studying a lot of courses including C.A which is the mo.. read more
Confuser

9 Years Ago

That is so wonderful...I cannot wait to here it someday!!! Lastly: I love Counting Crows...no need.. read more
just needs the music, its gotta be a success, i always like a song with plenty of verses and the chorus is good, well done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This does seem like it would make a good song. All good songs begin with a good poem! ~Sharon

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hope you'll set it to music and include a recording with your post

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful song ... Enjoyed it ..
_Beyourself

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very very good, would love to hear the song

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is top 40 hit song, and I want to hear the music that goes with these lyrics :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Hi armin. You have the makings of a great song here, but I feel it needs more work, a little more refinement, a little more passion. If you are mourning the loss of a partner, you need to have more heartache exposed in the words. I'd love to look at this again when you have added to the underlying emotion, alf

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful song, Armin. thanks for sharing :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago



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