On the sidewalk

On the sidewalk

A Poem by Amila Jay
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life

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On the sidewalk I walk alone

Precipitation of the night

Makes my nose so cold

Can some one tell me

Where to go

I don’t know

The sidewalk is the only place

I came to know

For a broken heart

To walk alone

© 2011 Amila Jay


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Amila Jay
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Kind of sad really, So well written, Love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

walking aimlessly seems to go hand in hand with broken hearts,well translated into a super write

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Added on August 29, 2011
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Amila Jay
Amila Jay

Kandy, Sri Lanka



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