Cry me a river

cry me a river
my poor soul to shiver
against the burns
that ravished
in my eyes
stuck like wound
in my heart
a piece of memory
in the past
relive it a thousand times
to tear my flesh apart
this soul is ripped
this soul is sin
this soul not knows the fearful rims

Author's Note

Lemme know your views....thanks:)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe sin is just lessons for us to be better. Few people can live a life without hurting or hurting others. Real sin is repeating the pain and damage again. The poem is strong. Type of poem that open the doors to conversation. Thank you for your outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Bette]

i really like this and the set up. It read smooth except one line for me stuck like wound. Stuck like a wound? Just a thought. Again well done.

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

A great poem expressing a pain for your poor ripped soul. A true piece of art.

[Art]

nice work Amila...such is the Soul that suffers through those memories of the past...

[Egoless]

amazing.

[Leslie Philibert]

Good work.Liked the juxtaposition of short and long lines that gave the poem a real natural feeling.Great last three lines.Well done.

[WhiteWillow]

This is beautiful! I especially love the line "my poor soul to shiver against the burns." Vivid. Masterfully done!

[Ambrosine]

That was Amazing! I hope you'll send me more to review Thank you!

[BlueDreams]

A Memorable write... Sweetly crafted... :-)

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really lovely writing... I like whole wording... Keep it up.. God bless you!

[InkSlinger]

written with the grace of a broken heart... and a bucket full of tears..
Loved it!