Man

Man

A Poem by Amila Jay
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Man is really the super being A poem by Danister I Fernando

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Man is really the super being,
Belonging to the human kind,
Provided well with hearing and seeing,
And also a positive supreme mind

Some of course lead satisfactory life,
But others go wrong in their ways;
They fill they minds with greed and strife,
And make a mess of their days

Some are badly money crazy,
And pursue money all the time,
Their concept of life is rather hazy,
And end up emptily when death bells chime

Man should uphold the status of man,
And live in thoughts upon the grandest;
Toiling constantly for betterment of man,
Fixes his mind upon the highest

© 2011 Amila Jay


Author's Note

Amila Jay
Solely I don't own this writing! I found this poem in a magazine and I really liked it. The author of this poem is Danister I Fernando, thank you for this lovely poem.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm glad you chose to post this poem. I especially love the second to last stanza.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm glad that you gave credit when credit is due....I was worried there for a second. It's good to share inspirtation...you never know what good might come from it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You did some fine work here, Amila...Nicely done!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Even if you didn`t write it yourself it is very clever to pass this good poem along.Don`t know the writer,I`ll see if I can find out more.Part of being a good poet is being able to read and look at other works.Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Great poem, thanks for sharing this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very fantastic poem you put here.. thanks for sharing such piece :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is Superb! Man could be the super being, and yet sometimes greed and strife corrupts the supreme mind... Great message. Thank you for sharing this.

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Amila Jay
Amila Jay

Kandy, Sri Lanka



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