My Shadow

 

 

Shadows in the alley way

Roaming for nothing to do

Lonely souls they are

Wandering everywhere

They follow people

And haunt them while they sleep

They bring nightmares

And make little children weep

And then the rain washes them away

But when the sun comes back

So will my shadow

My dark side to life

To haunt me till my dying days

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Kazian]

Very interesting poem, awesome job...

[Vesa Lee]

This is very good.
I love the idea of my shadow being all the evil and bad I can never shake.
I looked at some of your other pieces and found you to be a very insightful writer.
Keep it up.
The Cafe needs poetry with deeper meaning.

[Lucky Lucy Lamb]

W-h-o-a Loved this, so good Martina were do u come up with these ideas?

[Leah Jane]

I like concept of the shadow haunting! Great work.

[hiralarious]

This was.. amazing. I loved it all, but mostly I liked the last few lines. I kind of wondered where you were going to take that poem, and you finished it off wonderfully. (:
Great poem.

[Leah C]

I liked the way the words just flowed, it meant something to me by just reading it, i know there's something bursting to get out of you. LET IT OUT GIRL!!!

[Michael X]

martina, you did a nice job on this poem, I see quality to the form and flow, and its heartfelt,
it draws to mind eternity, and what life means in such a scope, keep up the great work

[poetic soul]

hey.. nice write.. nice take on "shadow" to be called haunting.....liked the concept and the simplicity of words...

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[LauraH]

Woah! that's really good