Your Own Desire

Desires and Wishes are tempting us in a never ending struggle in our lives and surely causing our deaths. :)

Desires and wishes

tempting your mind

You've got to be richest

If you're so kind

 

Why wonder and choose

when you know the answer

You've got nothing to lose

you're dieing from cancer

 

What are you chances

and what do you want

You know your advances

to live more you can't

 

But don't go in pain

and endless regret

Because you would gain

even from death

Reviews

[EmpressPoetess]

If one has faith......Thanks for sharing

[Wicahpi]

cool poem...with one correction needed
"dieing" is dying

I hope the last stanza is the truth.

[*Evelen*]

I like this. The flow is nice, and you did really good with the rhyming words! =) I like the last verse the most. Good job!