Evanescence

Aversion is not meant to be forever....Love on the other hand, depends on the circumstances.

Will thou commemorate the cries of war,

Or will remember the moments of joy?

But one thing you all need to understand is,

That hatred won't hold the buoy.

 

But something that you all are already told,

The sun of hatred and tragedy, always,

Will be blocked by the eclipse of love,

To lay a peaceful shadow for days.

 

And once that your grief ends,

Will thou remember it again or never?

Your sorrow and grief will change, ofcourse,

The world won't stay the same forever.

 

For those who donot understand,

Widen your horizons; you'll see what you admire,

And love and happiness will make a difference,

For the evil, war will remain a desire.

 

Remember the days you were a victim,

But now witness the affection till end,

On your hands, this is resembled by the ineradicable lines,

Let the bad days be the course's bend.

 

Hatred and rest, for time, will do the best they can,

But love, till death, will be preserved in the minds of the man.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Bruno]

Wonderfully written!

[SpokenWord]

Is love really strong enough to overcome such a battle of man's will to destroy for fun? In a way I have an internal struggle going on when it comes to love and what it offers or takes away when it vanishes. Your poem is beautiful because under the test of time Love should win hands down. We participated with this between wars as our nation grew during more peaceful times. Even now during our current wars love is still the message that comes forth from the more peaceful of hearts. I saved this poem because it spoke to me in a positive way. Excellent write.

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

A smile and bone chills wraped in insprational ribbon

[Talal Tashfeen]

oiiiiii!!! Where did you copy this from? :p It is awesome!

[Anwesh]

Ok.. a good topic to write about.. ur flow is good too.. but the choice of words could have been better.. and it seems u have unnecessarily tweaked some lines just to sound them like a poem.. that's unwanted really..

Anyways, good writing.. Keep it up..

Keep smiling :) and keep rocking m/

[Abba]

I think this is a great poem. It flows nicely, and it's very interesting. It's a great subject to write on, and I think you captured the essence of it very well.

[FANTASYKNIGHT]

hey, this is a great poem! i like your perspective of everything and the insight, how you intrique people to feel the same! its great, tho, you start using 'thou' but end up sayng 'you' to, which would have better been replaed with 'thy' or 'thee'. anyway, its a great poem! heads up! :)