To William

A message to a lover.

Please tell him I will miss him

When fate bids us apart

For though we love each other

Ours is a hopeless art.

The time with him I spent

Is best of all the  best

A "then" worth looking back

As bird longs for its nest.

This poem will cause him heartache

But dread not the goodbyes

I'm sure we're soulmates somewhere

Where our forever lies...

Author's Note

I challenged myself to write a poem in less than 10 minutes. This is what I've come up with.

P.S. William, I hope you get the chance to read this. :)

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Is something like "answer me, tell him even if it hurts why my pupils do not shine when I think of him".

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

You stun me with your thought-provoking responses. Thanks a lot! :x

[shallimarRose]

This is pretty good for 10 minutes.. I have some I do to a 3 minute egg timer lol things like this are good writing exercises. sR

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Haha, thanks a lot, Rose. :x

[shallimarRose]

You're welcome hun.. Love to read here.. xo

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Where's William?

Haha! Here's an outspoken person like me. I think we're sisters. You have another pic here which I also used in one of my old poems. LOL.

Send him a read request and he'll surely read this. Or send him the link via FB. LOL.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I'm beginning to suspect something like that, too. Haha. Your style of writing and your themes and your choice of words and your choice of pictures (lots of and's here) are somewhat similar to mine! Ohh, I have a sister in words now. :D

Anyway, he will read this. I will tell him one of these days. Have a great weekend to you! :x

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

We have the same color preference, too. Actually my fave color is blue, not only because it's the lucky color of Virgo, but also it's the coolest color for me - the color of the sky, ocean, sleep, twilight. I also like pink, since it makes a good combination with blue...so pretty and feminine.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Lol, you are indeed my sister! Haha, anyway, I'll try to visit this site every now and then. I'm busy these days I haven't been able to give reviews to RRs sent to me. And also to your messages. Sorry, okay? :x